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On the last chapter.....Kiku saw his brother, Rukawa....
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Inside Yamira's House....

Kiku: (The moment he wakes up, I'll punch him again.)
Rukawa starts to wake up...
Rukawa: huh?
Kiku: WHY!? Kiku then punched Rukawa on the stomach
Rukawa: oof.. What was that for!?
Kiku: Hmph! For leaving me without saying anything!
Rukawa: Like you care!
Kiku: Yeah I do!
Rukawa: Right said in a sarcastic way
Kiku: Don't you dare use a sarcastic voice to me! Kiku punched Rukawa...again...
Rukawa: If you want to know why I left you, then stop punching me dammit!
Kiku: Fi--
Rukawa: And feed me! I'm not super human that never gets hungry you know!
Kiku sweat dropped

Outside Yamira's House

???: Where did you hide him?!

Inside Yamira's House

Kiku: !!! That voice!
Kiku rushed outside...
and she saw someone very familiar...


Outside Yamira's House

Kiku: Yu.....Yuna!?
Yuna: First the prince next is you! I should get a huge promotion by now!
Nixme: You know her?
Kiku: She....she's the spy
Shiawase: spy?
Kiku: The spy who made the clan turn to nothing....
Yuna: It is already nothing when I joined!
Kiku: You take that back traitor!
Yuna: wait a minute.....You're still alive!?
Kiku: Yeah! So I can kill you!
Yuna: In your dreams.

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Surprise surprise here's the chapter 6!
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Chapter 6: Thats Why
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Yuna: This time I'll make sure to kill you, and your brother! personally!
Kiku: Try me backstabber!
Kiku took out a dagger and Yuna did the same.....
Both of them attacked at the same time.....

Rukawa: Kiku! This is my fight! While he said that, he blocked Kiku and Yuna's attack with his two katanas...
Kiku: Hmph! Its always your fight! Kiku stepped away
Yuna: We'll meet again! Someday! Yuna disappeared with a poof of smoke
Rukawa: Dammit!
Kiku: Nice going Rukawa! said in a sarcastic voice
Rukawa: Tch! Hey! I'm hungry!
Kiku: Why ask me? I don't own this house.
Yamira: Looks like its time to cook...Nixme! let's go!
Nixme: Right!
Yamira and Nixme cooked food to feed everybody...
Kiku: Hey Rukawa!
Rukawa: What!? By the way I like the food!
Kiku: Tell me now!
Rukawa: Tell you what?
Kiku: Why You left me. I'm sure everyone would like to listen!
Yamira, Shiawase, Nixme: Yeah!
Rukawa: Sure....
Rukawa: One *slurp*....day...when...*slurp*...you were sleeping...a guy came....*chomp*...and gave me...*chomp* a letter....*glug*...then he left after that...
Kiku: (That is so like him....eating while telling something!)Kiku was getting pissed
Rukawa: More please!
Kiku: (He eats and eats but he never gets fat...)
Rukawa: ...the letter....*slurp* says that I.....*chomp* have to see.....*slurp* the Emperor....*glug* but...the...Government....*chomp*Yuna's group....*slurp*...chases...me....everywhere.....*chomp* I....go...That is why I left you.
Kiku: Why not tell me then?
Rukawa: It also says that not to tell anyone.
Nixme: So thats why the Emperor told me to find you!
Rukawa: he's finding me?
Kiku: .... Now I'm not sure if you just made the story up or your just stupid.
Rukawa: I didn't made it up!
Kiku: Okay you ARE stupid.
Rukawa: How can you say that?
Shiawase: Oh c'mon! Even I know what she means!
Rukawa: Eh?
Yamira: You just told the story and you forgot already that the Emperor needs to see you.
Rukawa: Oh....right.
Kiku: (He still doesn't get it....)
Yamira: .....
Nixme: I rephrase what I said a while ago....
Rukawa: Hm?
Nixme: So that's why the Emperor told me to find you....Because he thought you got lost.
Rukawa: What was that suppose to mean!?
Kiku: Oh you may be right there Nixme!

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Now it looks longer! right?
©2006-2009 ~reaper-poring
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woosh! am bored.. now update, boo for you, you have to wait for me to update but i already have around 36 chapters of doom!!

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:iconhakuiceprogidy619:
Great job!! It does look longer, And it is longer (at least chapter 6)
I hope you do art for this series, I'm sure it'll give it more hits ^_^

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awsome job

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an eye for an eye leave the whole world blind
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NICE JOB! BOING...BOING....

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"Spectacular, spectacular" - Moulin Rouge
:iconreaper-poring:
I'm no good at art XD My friend ~ygo-yamira is doing the art ^^

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Thanks :D

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"Yaoi" is just a fancy word for gay sex :|
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Sarcastic much

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"Yaoi" is just a fancy word for gay sex :|
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no prob

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an eye for an eye leave the whole world blind
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khe....

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"Spectacular, spectacular" - Moulin Rouge
:iconygo-yamira:
:D :D Cool. You updated. ABOUT TIME, TOO!! You know, it would be better if it would be uhh, novel-like. Like add some details man!! And use this >> "...". If you want I can become your betta reader. :lol: It would be fun... and I have nothing to do so...
Do I have to draw a comic of this story? Will shishi-kage help me with it? Am I gonna do it at all? Tell me!!
Oh yesh, this was long, but it wouldn't be without chapter six, ne? :):):)

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